We have been learning to chose our topic for writing and write a story. I have enjoyed writing story about my holiday. Next time I will get more sentences written to make my story bigger.
For my holiday I went to the Great Barrier and me, Mum, Kane and Winona went to my Nana and Poppas. Why we went there was because my mum went to the ball with Kane. I went and had a sleepover at my cousins and at Ila’s for one night and then for some more nights. Then we went to Auckland and we slept in a Juicy van. Me and Winona slept up top and Kane and mum slept under us and we went up to the sky tower . Then the next day we went to the warehouse and got a onesie for me, Winona, mum and Kane. I got a Jaguar, Winona got a Unicorn, mum got a penguin and Kane got a wolf. Then we went back to Christchurch and it snowed. We were going home that day but couldn’t get home. Later that day we went back and we stopped and played with snow and then my sister needed to go to the toilet. I got out of the car and then my sister and my mum got out and I threw a snowball at my mum and then we were home.
Hi Harmony, looks like you had lots of fun on your holiday. What was the thing that you enjoyed most while you were away? When you write your next story will you write a fictional story? Do you know what the word fictional means?
ReplyDeleteHi Naomi,i have just finished my 2 one and its a fictional story.
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